Sunday, March 16, 2008

POEM:

IN A SUNSHINE NEIGHBORHOOD IN DR:

I learned the
difference between
roses and violets

carin~o
come and help me
she'd tell me

on the mornings
my parents
would leave

to work at
the restaurant

my grandma
would move as wind

maintain the flowers
as good as gold

listen to radio
and sing them
old songs

dance while cooking
in the kitchen

when she'd say
mi muchachita
she'd laugh and
give me a big hug

with my grandma
I learned to spread
water on the flowers

to point out the red
roses in the sunshine

DR gardens, rivers,
sea

in her eyes I'd see
them in her rainbow

I'd feel them and
see the different colors
like a stripe

one day I was told
she was gone

but still I feel her
in my heart

whispering in
my ear and mind
carin~o.

9 comments:

carlaamanesl said...

i love your poem is very intersting and i understood everything you try to said in the poem.

sharmin ahmed said...

I like your poem. Your feeling was very good

luis said...

This is my favorite poem... you are a good writer=)

Jerry said...

was up nice poem i like it and keep going and my name is jerry if u want to know me. What was good in the poem is that u described things.

Anyii said...

I love your poem is very good u use all the rubric need it :)

Yovanny said...

great long and i can understand everything.

M0h@mm3d Ha$an said...

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Carlosblog_esl said...

i like your poem it is very interesting.

M0h@mm3d Ha$an said...

THIS WAS ACTUALLY GOOD, JUST KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, LIKE MR.SERIN SAID YOU MIGHT GET A SHOLARHSHIP.