Thursday, December 20, 2007

COMPARATIVE FORM OF WORDS

WRITE THE COMPARATIVE FORM OF EACH WORD BELOW.
1- All of the comparative essays are easier than before.
2- The speed of the train is faster than the speed of the car.
3- The E train in the morning is more crowded than in the afternoon.
4- My dog is friendly than yours.
5- My cousin is thiner than my brother.
6- This room is dirtier than the other.
7- I am strongly successfully with my average than my sister.
8- I am happier in Christmas than my birthday.
9- My cousin is a handsomer model style than me.
10- I am more honestly than my uncle.
11- Today the temperature is hotter than yesterday.
12- All my classes are more difficulty than before.
13- My hair is curlier than yours.
14- My mother is cleaner than me.
15- My friend is clever than yours.

CONNECT THE FOLLOWING SENTENCES USING "HOWEVER".
1- Athens is a very old city. However, it has many buildings.
2- It is warm outside. However, our house is cold.
3- Jack doesn't study much. However, he does well in school.
4- The cost of Spain is crowded in the summer. However, very few people go there in the winter.
5- The bite of a coral snake is nearly painless. However, it can cause death.

COMBINE THE FOLLOWING SENTENCES WITH "BUT" OR "HOWEVER". WRITE "NO" AFTER THE SENTENCES THAT DO NOT EXPRESS CONTRAST.
1- Ostriches have wings. However, they cannot fly.
2- We are going to buy a used car. However, we cannot afford a new one.
3- Thomas Edison was not a successful student. However, he became one of the most important inventors in history.
4- Smoking cigarettes is unhealthy. However, many people smoke.
5- They were driving fast. They got a speeding ticket. "no"
6- The spider looks very delicate. However, it can survive almost anywhere.
7- The price is still high. However, we are still going to buy the house.
8- She doesn't like pizza. However, she ate some last night.

COMPARISON & CONTRAST ESSAY ON TWO HOUSES (DUNCAN AND ARLA)

Around my neighborhood there are two house. One house is Duncan and the other house is Arla. They both house have many similarities but at the same time have many differences in between.

These two house have many similarities in between. Both house have the same characteristics inside their house they both have the same two bedrooms, kitchen, living room, bath, dining room,and car port. Also, both house have the same price, they cost $ 90,000. Which is interesting since a costumer want to buy a house they would know the prices of the house around that neighborhood.

These two house have many differences in between. They both have different location and direction, Duncan house is located across the street and Arla house is situated in front of the street. Furthermore, the house on Duncan have better benefits than Arla street since is made of brick and Arla house is made of wood,which need to paint. The house on Duncan have a big back yard. Although, the house on Arla have no backyard. In the same way, Duncan house have low heating bills payment, which is $ 40 in March, on the other side, Arla house have high heating bills payment, which is $ 120 in March.

To conclude, the house of Duncan have better benefits conditions in living in that neighborhood than Arla house which needs some repairs. Equally, the two house cost the same more money on paying low heating bills, also it is more comfortable and protected having a backyard, and is made of brick.

Wednesday, December 19, 2007

TEACHING THE COMPARE AND CONTRAST ESSAY THROUGH MODELING




Together students and teacher during the modeling, students observe what writers do when revising a draft as they reread and write. They will begin to explore the techniques that writers use such as, rearranging or clarifying words or sentences. Students then apply the techniques by continuing the draft independently. On the other hand teachers model the writing process for their classes can see the light surrounded moments in the students faces as they think of ways to apply what is being demonstrated in their own writing.


Students devote their best strategies to comprehend, interpret,evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their informal experience, their interactions with other standards of observation and techniques they adjust their use of spoken, writing, and visual language to communicate with a group of audiences and for different purposes such as, continuing the draft independently.

Teachers apply their best knowledge teaching directly and clearly in response to students needs carefully demonstrating especially showing how clearly explaining. Teachers give their best that they can to students to do well, they first have to show them how. Second writing out loud with students give enjoyment for the writing process. Third students modeled their draft creativities to the audience.

A final occupation and devote strategies between students and teachers in modeling style is that students during modeling career begin to investigate and at the same time learn from writers experience. Although teachers give their best knowledge of teaching to show students draft styles design independently with their own creativities.

To conclude, the strategies of students and teachers in modeling styles their observations and teaching experience apply their experiences comparison to communicate with a variety of audiences demonstrating their independently draft designs.

Tuesday, December 18, 2007

SENTENCE COMBINING

1- Automobile-related businesses make up a huge industrial complex. They are responsible for 20 percent of the annual GNP.

A. Automobile are responsible for 20 percent of the annual GNP their related businesses make up a huge industrial complex.
B. Automobile make up a huge industrial complex in related businesses they are responsible for 20 percent of the annual GNP.
C. Responsible make up a huge industrial complex. Automobile related businesses make up a huge industrial complex.

2- Motor vehicles are harmful to the environment. They are responsible for 25 percent of U.S. carbon dioxide emissions.
A. Motor vehicles are responsible for 25 percent of U.S. carbon dioxide emissions and they are harmful to the environment.
B. Motor vehicles have the responsibility for 25 percent of U.S. carbon dioxide emissions and they are harmful to the environment.
C. The responsibility for 25 percent of U.S. carbon dioxide emissions. Motor vehicles are harmful to the environment.

Friday, December 14, 2007

COMPREHENSION QUESTIONS






1- WHAT ARE SOME ADVANTAGES OF CARS?

The some advantages of cars are Freedom to go where they want to go, when they want to go. The purpose of it is cheaply, quickly, and safely as possible.

2- IF PEOPLE STOPPED USING CARS, WHAT EFFECT WOULD THIS HAVE ON THE ECONOMY?
If people stopped using cars, the effect would this have on the economy is that it would decrease and people are going to have minorities probabilities and freedom to go where they want to go faster. Also it would be less jobs.

3- HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE KILLED EACH YEAR IN CAR AND TRUCK ACCIDENTS?
The average of people that are been killed each year in a car and truck accidents of 250,000 people.

4- WHAT PERCENTAGE OF THE WORLD’S PEOPLE WILL BE INVOLVED IN AT LEAST ONE CAR OR TRUCK ACCIDENT DURING THEIR LIVES?
The percentage of the world’s people that will be involved in at least one car or truck accident during their lives is half of the world’s people will be involved in a auto accident at some time during their lives.

5- WHAT IS THE CONNECTION BETWEEN URBAN SPRAWL AND CARS?
The connection between urban sprawl and cars is that there are biggest factor to urban sprawl. The houses are spread out and there is along distance between them and they have the freedom to go to in one place to other.

6-WHY ISN’T PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION A FEASIBLE ALTERNATIVE TO CARS IN THE UNITED STATES?

Public transportation isn’t a feasible alternative to cars in the United states since, it causing a lot of air pollution and more people are driving cars which is bad for health and there area lot of traffic periods.The distance are spread out.

7- IF THERE WERE SUDDENLY NO FUEL FOR CARS, WHAT WOULD LOS ANGELES BE LIKE?
If there were suddenly no fuel for cars, Los Angeles would be like less noise, and less contamination of air pollution.

8- HOW HAS TRAVELING BY CAR IN NEW YORK CITY CHANGED SINCE 1907?
Traveling by car in New York city changed since 1907 by more cars and trucks with potential power of 100 to 300 horses creep a long N.Y, at the average auto speed 8 kilometers per hour.

9- WHAT ROLE DO CARS PLAY IN POLLUTING THE AIR?
The role that cars play in polluting the air is contaminating the society and causing danger air pollution with carbon dioxide on Global warming.

10- WHAT ARE SOME OTHER DISADVANTAGES OF CARS?
The some other disadvantages of cars are increases the change of wars, as the United states and other countries attemp to protect oil in the oil- rich.







ADVANTAGES:
- faster freedom to go were they want to.
- Travel very far is faster easier, transport goods.
- Create more jobs.
- Contructions workers.
- Helps the economy.
- Great tool to show off.
- gain your self confidence.














DISADVANTAGES:


Kill people.
Air pollution.
Global warming.
Accidents.
Wars.

THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF READING THE NEWSPAPER




The production and distribution of the modern popular newspaper, which is one of the most traditional business information published frequently, daily, and weekly. Have a lot of controversial common senses of pro and cons arguments about reading the newspaper.


Supporters of reading the newspaper argue that consumers through the large classified advertising opportunity to get in touch with the last news that are happening in our latest developments. In addiction, people can increase speaking performance in learning more the language. Furthermore, many people buy or get the newspaper just to read the advertisements from movies, restaurants, subway, discount stores, and adventures places. Although reading the newspaper have entertainment advertisement in different sections of the paper specially crosswords, games, sports, comics etc. Also reading the newspaper have some sections that readers pull out and save.

Opponents of reading the newspaper claim that readers may not read the section that people advertised in, or they may simply have skipped the page or the article since it contained little or nothing else of interest. In addiction, people who's creating and making the newspaper are destroying our natural resources cutting down more trees to make productions. Furthermore, the advertisement of the newspaper sometimes give wrong information about a biography of a person or personal information.

Some people may still maintain that reading the newspaper is a waisting time in not interested good stuff or any advertisement. However, we need to be informed on what is happening in the world around us and to keep us advertised about special offers that can benefits us for not been spending a lot of money in expensive stuff.

To conclude, reading the newspaper is more advantaged to people since, it keep us informed and advertisement on what is going on around us. Also reading the newspaper can benefits us to increase speaking performance in learning more the language and even saving us to not spend a lot of money in stuff that we can find it on special offers.

Monday, December 3, 2007

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY WRITING






CELL PHONES

A new theory suggest that cell phones on school environment due to the fact that they are a highly distractive influence on the learning society. Such as, students can use cell phones for talking in out of class, testing, cheating, and even some cases used for Gang related violence. Also, loss our theft of students cell phones leads to unwanted controversy on who is responsible for replacing them. If cell phones are not allowed on school environments, all of these problems would be solved. However the cell phone has changed the world with the new technology and is the best quick communication during times of an emergency. Also it keep us in sign around the world in any type of circumstance.

Supporters of cell phones argue that cell phones should be trusted since it is effective and a faster advantaged of communication. They say that is the best choice of an emergency and it always helps us with our everyday duties. Now we can do homework or work at home and we don't need to print it out. We can just sent it to our emails by internet. In addiction it is a positive issue of advantaged technology cell phones also enable students to contact their parents at any time for any reason. For example, if a student forgot that they have an after school affair for that day, such as a sports practice or tutoring , they could easily notify their parents or guardian the situation.

Opponents of cell phones also assert that cell phones developed brain cancer tumor. They think so because the vibration of the cell phone goes directly to the heart causing this type of reaction to the brain and circulatory system. Also the people against cell phones believe that one of the most dangerous aspects of using a cell phone while driving is how much it increases your chances of getting into a car accident.

Most people still maintain that cell phones are just a way of wasting money. They think that cell phones were invented for us to pay the companies more money. The reality is that even though cell phones are making us pay more is very important to have one, in a emergency in any type of case of communication.

In conclusion, the cell phone is the best choice and quick communication during any type of emergency. It can be used anywhere at anytime. Also by wireless internet communication we can do work or homework at home and we don't have to print it out, the simplest way is just sent it to our emails.

Thursday, November 29, 2007

The Canterbury Tales Jigsaw Project

A View of Medieval Life: The Canterbury Tales: Jigsaw Matrix

The Clerk’s Tale The Wife of Bath’s Tale The Pardoner’s Tale
What is the story primarily about?



The Clerk’s Tale
The story is about Griselda who had to pass to prove she was a good and patient wife The king found a poor girl and try to get marry with her, And he is one of the most cute in the city every girl wants with him. As soon as he was gone, his two companions sat down, and the wicked, evil leader began to speak . They made a pact that they were going to divide the gold among the three of them but one of them refused. When the pardoner finished their story, to take advantage of the impact it has had on the other pilgrims, he offers to sell them pardons and pray to God to forgive them for all the sins that they did and keep them from the sin of greed.


Who is telling the story? What characteristics does this person have?


The Wife of Bath’s Tale
This story is about the wife from the city of Bath was a most unusual pilgrim. During the middle ages, women were not independent, and they were not allowed to be assertive. She is both.
The wife she tells says a lot about her character and shows how many women may have felt at the time, The wife from the city of Baths was a most unusual pilgrim. During the middle ages, women were not independent and they were not allowed to be assertive. The person that is telling the story is The pardoner. The characteristics of this person is that he is corrupt.


What are some typical medieval elements in the story?


The Pardoner’s Tale
The story is about greed, avarice, and covetousness. -Nobleman
-Knight
-King
-Queen Medieval elements in that in the Middle ages they believe in Dead.


What elements in the story are universal?



Nobleman. Snife, wine, gold or silver coins, or silver pins, or golden spoons, or rings.

I REMEMBER

I remember when I was a child my grandmother tell me stories about her self when she was a teenager. I remember the first time that I went to the camp and the birds were around the houses singing in their dialect. I remember the first time that I came to the United States and the climate was so different. I remember the first time that I went back to Dominican Republic and my family was waiting for me with a special dinner. I remember the first time that I was speaking in English. I remember when I went to a resort with my best friend. I remember all the experiences in my first job. I remember the first time that I felt in love with a guy. I remember the first snow that I had in New York. I remember the first essay that I wrote about my life. I remember the first time that I meet new friends from different nationalities.

LIFE IN 2020

I think life in 2020 will change in many ways. There will be substantial changes in technology, we will have more advanced weapons. Life will be easier for people because we will have a clean environment, better public transportation and better jobs. More over Global warming will reverse a new technology that can control the air and prevent the contamination of our environment.

There will be tremendous advancements by 2020 in Technology. We will have a telephone gadget which operates on electricity generated by our brain,allows our manager to speak with us as any time during working hours.This electronic device which are supposed to make us more efficient.


Although these changes are going to affect us for life in 2020 for so many reasons.In the same way as more advance technology will change human society in the way of living more comfortable but at the same time people can be lazy or people can waist too much money in electronic devices.For example cell phones,computers,machines,cars,and radio etc.

The quality of life will be better. People will get better paying jobs by working less with better technology that can control the manufacturing having instructions that will tell the person in the correct order how to do it.

Therefore life will be easier for our environment by having better jobs.As a result of societies are going to be more technological and people are going to be more compatible having everything easier and faster without doing hard work.

As a result of global warming we will have a new technology that can control the air and prevent the contamination in our environment. Also this technology will normalize climatic changes,decrease sea levels, flooding, melting of polar ice caps and glaciers, fluctuation in temperature and precipitation.

To conclude, the technology will affect and change our lives in a possitive and negative ways. By making life more easier and at the same time more expensive. I am more optimistic about the future but I know that It will bring some problems with it.


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MY MEMOIR

Grand mother’s bed room

Since I was 6 years old I have been talking about teen age self esteem to the people that I trust in who sit every afternoon at mama’s bed room in hot neigh boor hood, south queens. The bed room is large and big. There is a big chimney next to the cough, and this is where she sits when she wants to take a brake in the house. Outside she can she the birds at the orange tree, eating the raise that she left them, and she can who’s throwing water to the flowers or who’s child is walking out waiting at the bus station to pick them up. There are buildings all around, and her eyes will follow them looking how much high they are, up past Gabriela’s Zunigas’ house and on. When I am visiting, I make sure I never sit in Grand mother’s cough. I want her to be warm next to her chimney.

Relatives will come by- Uncle Asela and cousin Anyelina, Yorzany and the guys, Carla and the baby and all sit in the big cough in the window way or on an extra old extra chair that will not let anybody to go to the kitchen who’s trying to get to through the kitchen. But everybody wants to go into the kitchen to eat the cultural food that Grand mama’s cook every afternoon, where there are plenty of sits for all of us. We want to be in Grand mama’s kitchen, near this heavy old table, and we want to drink chocolate and coffee and cake or clean over after that eating bread and talk having a family conversation been unit to each other sharing each one of us our experiences until we are all talked out, and there is everything clean or nothing left to do but go on home and rest up and come back tomorrow to talk some more and at the same time take care of Grand mama’s.

PLANING A FIVE PARAGRAPH ESSAY

All students in lower school should be required to do social service for at least one term each year.First, the experience would allow them to get closer to disadvantaged people,understand their needs and help them in some small way.Second,the students would have an opportunity to interact with each other UWC students whom they would not normally meet back in school.Third,they would probably discover that however service involves soma hard work,it is also good fun and leaves one with a sense of achievement.

The experience would allow them to get closer to disadvantaged people,understand their needs and help them in some small way.For example,when you work with a physically disabled person,you start to realize how many obstacles they have to face day + how courageous skillful they are.

In addiction,the students would have an opportunity to interact with each other UWC students when they would not normally meet back in school.in contrast during normal school hours,spend nearly all time with own class,but social service is attend by students from a mixture of classes and grades.Similarly discover that people appreciate your friendship they enjoy being with you for a while + chatting.

Finally,they would probably discover that although service involves some hard work,it is also good fun and leaves one with a sense of achievement.Therefore very rewarding when your partner makes progress,although you have to be very patient (e.g. with a mischievous child).Also GAmes,music,simple art and crafts etc.involve lots of laughs.

In summary,my beliefs is that students at UWC should do work for social service and get all the experiences opportunities that they have would benefits for themselves.Also I think that at the same time they would have the opportunity to interact with each other and make more friendships.

BOOK REPORT

TITLE OF THE BOOK: When I was Puerto Rican

AUTHOR: Esmeralda Santiago

NUMBER OF PAGES: 240

CHARACTERS: Negi, Julia.

PROTAGONIST
: Negi her physical appearance is white skin, black long hair, brown eyes, tall, and dresses with a colorful dress. She acts like a girl that is interesting in the future by been a smart girl in school. Helps her mother with her other little children’s.

ANTAGONIST: Julia her physical appearance is a strong tall girl, yellow short hair, green eyes, and dresses with short shirts and scares. She acts jealous of Negi because, she wants to be better a prettier than the other girls. She have a bad attitude of screaming at people that she hate.

SETTING: San Juan, Puerto Rico.

Anyelina I think you should read this book since, is a personal journey of a immigrant life as cultural experience. Details a young girl own feelings growing up in a poor family but at the same time facing the realities of life.

I decide to read this book because, I identified my self as growing up in a similar situation which I had to immigrated to the United states to have a better life and opportunities that will benefits for my future and my dreams of life.

The plot When I was Puerto Rican, by Esmeralda Santiago, is interesting because it gives the reader a realistic sense of cultural life immigration. Negi the adolescent girl who spend her childhood in Puerto Rico living in poverty. When she was thirteen years old her family moves to the United states to get a better life and to get more opportunities and benefits so they could have a better future also she had to learned enough English to be a accepted in High School.

THE TWO THINGS THAT REALLY MADE ME TO LIKE THIS BOOK:

1- The characters skills and interactions.
2- The interesting life experience as a immigrant.

I really don’t understand the part when Julia starts missing Negi migrated to the United States.

This book is similar to another book that I read because it have the main point of view but with different experience of life.

When I was Puerto Rican, by Esmeralda Santiago, the theme of the story follows Negi through her hardships and joys of growing up along with her mother and her youngest bothers and sisters. Spend most of her childhood in Puerto Rico living in poverty. Her family did not have very much money and surviving was sometimes a struggle, especially when the family keep growing. The family’s lack of money lack them to move a lot throughout Puerto Rico. All the moving caused problems with Negi; she often found herself lost in the world she’s been living in her whole life. Not only does Negi's family not have much money, they also struggle to stick together. Negi's father, isn't home very much, upsetting Negi's mother immensely. She blames him for cheating and becomes very angry, resulting in Negi having a lot of unwanted responsibility around the house. This unwanted responsibility causes a strain on their mother daughter relationship. Negi is constantly trying to find herself in a very confusing world, where her father is never around, her family is always moving and her relationship with her mother and siblings is inconsistent. Just when Negi turns 13 and the problems of her childhood seem to be settling down, her mother moves Negi and her siblings to New York City. This changes Negi's life completely; everything she once knew is left behind in Puerto Rico. She has to start all over again. Negi has to work very hard at school, to learn English and catch up with the other children her age. Through her hard work and determination she is able to accomplish a lot and make herself a bright future.

10 WORDS THAT I LEARNED FROM THIS BOOK:

ZEST:Liveliness or energy animating Negi self esteem.

CHRONICLE:A record history of events in High School.

ENCHANTS:To attract and delight entrance in the store

TREASURE:Land when Negi went back to Puerto Rico.

SEQUEL: The firs presentation of Negi in the auditorium.

HARVARD: The city when Negi visit her college.

CHOPPY: The waves of Puerto Rico.

GAZE:The curiosity of new culture.

BITTER: The taste sensation of the food.

CURRICULUM:The particular after school program of grammar and dance.